Thursday, 1 March 2012

The Deepest Poem I Have Ever Written

This one came right from the heart. Everyone who knows me, read this. I... I want you to know how I truly feel at times.

I turned my head to face the one thing I truly longed for.

He turned to me. I was left speechless. I looked deep into the black of his eyes, and I knew he was looking into mine.
Everything slowed down.
He moved closer.
I could see that he was nervous.
I wasn't.
I was certain that this was what I wanted.
The wait was over.
He moved closer.
I moved closer.
I could feel my head moving forward, until I was so close I could kiss him.
But I didn't.
I ate the live chicken.


  1. *laughs*

    *reads poem again*

    *laughs more*

  2. I'm glad you liked it, Sparky. I just hope those are laughs of amazement at my poetic skill.

  3. *laughs*
    You are the new Shakespear

  4. Beautiful Eve.
    I'm amazed at the depth of your emotional understanding.

  5. ...You might just be the new Emily
    Dickinson. I especially like the last line, it made my morning. :)

  6. Thank you, everyone. *bows and bows* *eats live chicken*

  7. Haha loved it!! You should publish that, ya know... You could make some $!! Love the humor :D

  8. That, right there, is easily the best poem ever written. XD


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